From 31eb4911529f06af43b6d06ee3eaf9f995df7a23 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Christian Cleberg <hello@cleberg.net>
Date: Mon, 23 Mar 2026 17:02:46 -0500
Subject: improve dungeon copy and strengthen clue-based room flow

---
 index.html | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 58c0781..e4d2b28 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 
 <section id="bones">
   <h2>Bones</h2>
-  <p>Bones on the floor. A torch still burns.</p>
+  <p>Bones on the floor. A torch still burns. Dark favors walls.</p>
   <p>
     <a href="#hall">Take torch</a><br>
     <a href="#pit">Move on</a>
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
 
 <section id="pit">
   <h2>Pit</h2>
-  <p>A black pit cuts the room in two.</p>
+  <p>A black pit cuts the room in two. Too wide. Dark below.</p>
   <p>
     <a href="#fell">Jump</a><br>
     <a href="#vault">Edge along wall</a>
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 
 <section id="idol">
   <h2>Idol</h2>
-  <p>A gold idol watches. Coins glitter at its feet.</p>
+  <p>A gold idol watches. Coins glitter at its feet. Its head is bowed.</p>
   <p>
     <a href="#cursed">Take gold</a><br>
     <a href="#crack">Bow</a><br>
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
 
 <section id="crack">
   <h2>Crack</h2>
-  <p>Barely wide enough.</p>
+  <p>Barely wide enough. Cold air slips through.</p>
   <p>
     <a href="#vault">Squeeze through</a><br>
     <a href="#hall">Return</a>
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