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 Hey, I'm Christian.
 
-I'm a technology audit manager, working on financial statement audits (SOX/MAR),
-SOC 1-3 reports, and other attestations for KPMG.
+I'm a technology audit manager, working on financial statement audits
+[Sarbanes–Oxley Act (SOX) & Model Audit Rule (MAR)], Service Organization
+Control (SOC) 1-3 reports, and other attestations for KPMG.
 
-Read up on my [[https://cv.cleberg.net][CV]] or [[https://cleberg.net/salary/][salary]] for more information. Otherwise, feel free to read [[https://cleberg.net/now/][what I'm doing now]].
+Read up on my [[https://cv.cleberg.net][CV]] or [[https://cleberg.net/salary/][salary]] for more information. Otherwise, feel free to read
+[[https://cleberg.net/now/][what I'm doing now]].
 
 In my spare time, I like to:
 
-- Run linux servers
+- Run Linux servers
 - Enhance my home lab network
 - Write personal programs, mostly in Python
-- Research various topics (history, geography, science, etc.)
+- Research topics (history, geography, science, etc.)
 - Write blog posts and general documentation
 - Converse with others on IRC
 - Play video games and watch television
 
 If you want to chat, you can find me in the following spaces:
 
-- hello [at] cleberg.net ([[https://cleberg.net/gpg.txt][GPG]])
+- hello [at] cleberg.net ([[https://cleberg.net/gpg.txt][PGP Key]])
 - [[https://lemmy.cleberg.net/u/cmc][@cmc]] on Lemmy
 - @cmc.01 on [[https://signal.org/][Signal]]