fix grammar in 2020 posts

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diff --git a/content/blog/2020-03-25-session-messenger.org b/content/blog/2020-03-25-session-messenger.org
index 40e4056..39dd984 100644
--- a/content/blog/2020-03-25-session-messenger.org
+++ b/content/blog/2020-03-25-session-messenger.org
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 
 The company behind Session (Loki Foundation) is from Australia. If you didn't
 know, Australia has introduced [[https://parlinfo.aph.gov.au/parlInfo/download/legislation/bills/r6195_aspassed/toc_pdf/18204b01.pdf][legislation]] mandating companies comply with
-government requests to build backdoor access into applications. For more
+government requests to build back door access into applications. For more
 information, read my article on [[./2020-01-25-aes-encryption.html][AES Encryption]].
 
 * About Session
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ Since most people are looking for an alternative to a popular chat app, I am
 going to list out the features that Session has so that you are able to
 determine if the app would suit your needs:
 
-- Multiple device linking (via QR code or ID)
+- Multiple device linking [via a quick-response (QR) code or identifier (ID)]
 - App locking via device screen lock, password, or fingerprint
 - Screenshot blocking
 - Incognito keyboard
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ determine if the app would suit your needs:
 * Downloads
 
 I have tested this app on Ubuntu 19.10, Android 10, macOS Monterey, and iOS 15.
-All apps have worked well without many issues.
+All apps have worked well without issue.
 
 Below is a brief overview of the Session app on Linux. To get this app, you'll
 need to go to the [[https://getsession.org/download/][Downloads]] page and click to link to the operating system
@@ -81,8 +81,8 @@ password, you will need to enter it every time you open the app.
 
 Once you've created your account and set up your profile details, the next step
 is to start messaging other people. To do so, you'll need to share your Session
-ID with other people. From this point, it's fairly straightforward and acts like
-any other messaging app, so I won't dive into much detail here.
+ID with other people. From this point, it's straightforward and acts like any
+other messaging app, so I won't dive into much detail here.
 
 ** macOS
 
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ pop-up box explaining the process that Session uses to hide your IP address:
 
 ** iOS
 
-The mobile app is quite simple and effective, giving you all the standard mobile
+The mobile app is simple and effective, giving you all the standard mobile
 messaging options you'd expect.
 
 * Potential Issues
@@ -100,9 +100,9 @@ I've discovered one annoying issue that would prevent from using this app
 regularly. On a mobile device, there have been issues with receiving messages on
 time. Even with battery optimization disabled and no network restrictions,
 Session notifications sometimes do not display until I open the app or the
-conversation itself and wait a few moments. This is actually one of the reasons
-I stopped using Signal (this seems fixed as of my updates in 2021/2022, so I
-wouldn't worry about this issue anymore).
+conversation itself and wait. This is actually one of the reasons I stopped
+using Signal (this seems fixed as of my updates in 2021/2022, so I wouldn't
+worry about this issue anymore).
 
 Looking for another messenger instead of Session? I recommend Signal, Matrix,
-and IRC.
+and internet relay chat (IRC).