fix grammar in 2020 posts

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/content/blog/2020-12-27-website-redesign.org b/content/blog/2020-12-27-website-redesign.org
index 1eddbca..1d0c1aa 100644
--- a/content/blog/2020-12-27-website-redesign.org
+++ b/content/blog/2020-12-27-website-redesign.org
@@ -19,10 +19,10 @@ anything on my main webpage that's vital, it allows me the freedom to change
 things as inspiration strikes.
 
 Historically, I've relied on core utilities for spacing, components, and layouts
-from [[https://getbootstrap.com][Bootstrap]] and added custom CSS for fonts, accents, colors, and other items.
-I also tend to create sites with no border radius on items, visible borders, and
-content that takes up the entire screen (using whitespace inside components
-instead of whitespace around my components).
+from [[https://getbootstrap.com][Bootstrap]] and added custom cascading style sheets (CSS) for fonts, accents,
+colors, and other items. I also tend to create sites with no border radius on
+items, visible borders, and content that takes up the entire screen (using
+whitespace inside components instead of whitespace around my components).
 
 * The Redesign Process
 
@@ -75,13 +75,13 @@ transferred (22 KB total), and my blog is at 6.5 KB transferred (13 KB total).
 *That means the redesigned pages are less than 2% the size of the old designs.*
 
 Google Lighthouse ranks the new webpage as 100 in performance, accessibility,
-and best practices, with SEO at 92 since they think tap targets are not sized
-appropriately for mobile users. First contextual paints of the pages are under
-0.8 seconds with 0 ms of blocking time. However, the blog subdomain ranks at 100
-for all four categories! First contextual paints of the blog homepage are under
-1.0 seconds with 0 ms of blocking time, due to the fact that the CSS for my blog
-is within a separate CSS file, and the CSS for my main website is simply
-embedded in the HTML file.
+and best practices, with search engine optimization (SEO) at 92 since they think
+tap targets are not sized appropriately for mobile users. First contextual
+paints of the pages are under 0.8 seconds with 0 ms (millisecond) of blocking
+time. However, the blog subdomain ranks at 100 for all four categories! First
+contextual paints of the blog homepage are under 1.0 seconds with 0 ms of
+blocking time, due to the fact that the CSS for my blog is within a separate CSS
+file, and the CSS for my main website is simply embedded in the HTML file.
 
 Now that everything is complete, I can confidently say I'm happy with the result
 and proud to look at the fastest set of websites I've created so far.