fix grammar in 2022 posts

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diff --git a/content/blog/2022-07-30-flac-to-opus.org b/content/blog/2022-07-30-flac-to-opus.org
index 36d9fe7..0c1910e 100644
--- a/content/blog/2022-07-30-flac-to-opus.org
+++ b/content/blog/2022-07-30-flac-to-opus.org
@@ -6,17 +6,15 @@
 * Converting FLAC to OPUS
 
 I am currently rebuilding my music library from scratch so that I can
-effectively archive all the music I own in the
-[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/FLAC][FLAC file format]], a lossless
-audio codec.
+effectively archive all the music I own in [[https://wikipedia.org/wiki/FLAC][FLAC]] (Free Lossless Audio Codec)
+files.
 
-However, streaming FLAC files outside the home can be difficult due to
-the size of the files, especially if you're using a weak connection.
+However, streaming FLAC files outside the home can be difficult due to the size
+of the files, especially if you're using a weak connection.
 
-So, in order to archive the music in a lossless format and still be able
-to stream it easily, I opted to create a copy of my FLAC files in the
-[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Opus_(audio_format)][Opus audio codec]].
-This allows me to archive a quality, lossless version of the music and
+So, in order to archive the music in a lossless format and still be able to
+stream it easily, I opted to create a copy of my FLAC files in the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Opus_(audio_format)][Opus audio
+codec]]. This allows me to archive a quality, lossless version of the music and
 then point my streaming service to the smaller, stream-ready version.
 
 ** Dependencies
@@ -28,39 +26,38 @@ proceeding, install the package:
 sudo apt install opus-tools
 #+end_src
 
-If you want to use a different conversion method, such as =ffmpeg= or
-=avconv=, simply install that package instead.
+If you want to use a different conversion method, such as =ffmpeg= or =avconv=,
+simply install that package instead.
 
 ** Conversion Process
 
-The script I'm using is stored in my home directory, but feel free to
-create it wherever you want. It does not need to be in the same
-directory as your music files.
+The script I'm using is stored in my home directory, but feel free to create it
+wherever you want. It does not need to be in the same directory as your music
+files.
 
 #+begin_src sh
 cd ~ && nano transform.sh
 #+end_src
 
-Once you have your new bash script opened in an editor, go ahead and
-paste the following logic into the script.
+Once you have your new bash script opened in an editor, go ahead and paste the
+following logic into the script.
 
 You *MUST* edit the following variables in order for it to work:
 
 - =source=: The source directory where your FLAC files are stored.
-- =dest=: The destination directory where you want the resulting Opus
-  files to be stored.
+- =dest=: The destination directory where you want the resulting Opus files to
+  be stored.
 
 You *MAY* want to edit the following variables to suit your needs:
 
-- =filename=: If you are converting to a file format other than Opus,
-  you'll need to edit this so that your resulting files have the correct
-  filename extension.
-- =reldir=: This variable can be edited to strip out more leading
-  directories in the file path. As you'll see later, I ignore this for
-  now and simply clean it up afterward.
-- =opusenc=: This is the actual conversion process. You may want to edit
-  the bitrate to suit your needs. I set mine at 128 but some prefer 160
-  or higher.
+- =filename=: If you are converting to a file format other than Opus, you'll
+  need to edit this so that your resulting files have the correct filename
+  extension.
+- =reldir=: This variable can be edited to strip out more leading directories in
+  the file path. As you'll see later, I ignore this for now and simply clean it
+  up afterward.
+- =opusenc=: This is the actual conversion process. You may want to edit the
+  bitrate to suit your needs. I set mine at 128 but some prefer 160 or higher.
 
 #+begin_src sh
 #!/bin/bash
@@ -126,8 +123,8 @@ opusenc --vbr --bitrate 128 --date "$DATE" \
 done
 #+end_src
 
-Once you're done, simply save the file and exit your editor. Don't
-forget to enable execution of the script:
+Once you're done, simply save the file and exit your editor. Don't forget to
+enable execution of the script:
 
 #+begin_src sh
 chmod +x transform.sh
@@ -139,16 +136,16 @@ Finally, you may now run the script:
 ./transform.sh
 #+end_src
 
-If you used =opusenc=, you'll see the conversions happen within the
-terminal as it progresses. You will also see variables printed if you
-uncommented any of the bash script's comments.
+If you used =opusenc=, you'll see the conversions happen within the terminal as
+it progresses. You will also see variables printed if you uncommented any of the
+bash script's comments.
 
 ** Cleanup
 
-As I noted above, I didn't customize my =reldir= variable in the script,
-which caused my output directory to be =/mnt/music/library/archives=
-instead of =/mnt/music/library=. So, I moved the output up one level and
-deleted the accidental directory.
+As I noted above, I didn't customize my =reldir= variable in the script, which
+caused my output directory to be =/mnt/music/library/archives= instead of
+=/mnt/music/library=. So, I moved the output up one level and deleted the
+accidental directory.
 
 #+begin_src sh
 cd /mnt/music/library
@@ -158,8 +155,8 @@ rm -rf archives
 
 ** Check the Resulting Size
 
-If you want to see what kind of file size savings you've gained, you can
-always use the =du= command to check:
+If you want to see what kind of file size savings you've gained, you can always
+use the =du= command to check:
 
 #+begin_src sh
 cd /mnt/music