fix grammar in 2022 posts

1 files changed, 21 insertions, 24 deletions

diff --git a/content/blog/2022-10-30-linux-display-manager.org b/content/blog/2022-10-30-linux-display-manager.org
index c749a22..4dd9b22 100644
--- a/content/blog/2022-10-30-linux-display-manager.org
+++ b/content/blog/2022-10-30-linux-display-manager.org
@@ -5,18 +5,16 @@
 
 * Display Manager Services
 
-In order to change the
-[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Display_manager][display manager]] on
-Void Linux - or any other Linux distro - you need to identify the
-currently enabled display manager.
+In order to change the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Display_manager][display manager]] on Void Linux - or any other Linux
+distribution - you need to identify the currently enabled display manager.
 
 ** Disabling the Current Display Manager
 
-Void Linux only has one ISO available for download with a pre-built
-display manager at the time of this post: the XFCE ISO. If you've
-installed this version, the pre-assigned display manager is =lxdm=. If
-you installed another display manager, replace =lxdm= in the following
-command with the display manager you have installed.
+Void Linux only has one optical disc image (ISO) available for download with a
+pre-built display manager at the time of this post: the XFCE ISO. If you've
+installed this version, the pre-assigned display manager is =lxdm=. If you
+installed another display manager, replace =lxdm= in the following command with
+the display manager you have installed.
 
 To disable =lxdm=, simply remove the service symlink:
 
@@ -26,9 +24,9 @@ sudo rm /var/service/lxdm
 
 ** Enabling a New Display Manager
 
-If you want to enable a new display manager, you can do so after =lxdm=
-is disabled. Make sure to replace =<new_display_manager>= with your new
-DM, such as =gdm=, =xdm=, etc.
+If you want to enable a new display manager, you can do so after =lxdm= is
+disabled. Make sure to replace =<new_display_manager>= with your new DM, such as
+=gdm=, =xdm=, etc.
 
 #+begin_src sh
 sudo ln -s /etc/sv/<new_display_manager> /var/service
@@ -37,8 +35,8 @@ sudo ln -s /etc/sv/<new_display_manager> /var/service
 * Set Up =.xinitrc=
 
 Depending on your setup, you may need to create a few X files, such as
-=~/.xinitrc=. For my personal set-up, I created this file to launch the
-i3wm as my desktop.
+=~/.xinitrc=. For my personal set-up, I created this file to launch the i3wm as
+my desktop.
 
 #+begin_src sh
 nano ~/.xinitrc
@@ -50,21 +48,20 @@ nano ~/.xinitrc
 exec i3
 #+end_src
 
-If you run a desktop other than i3, simply replace =i3= with the shell
-command that launches that desktop.
+If you run a desktop other than i3, simply replace =i3= with the shell command
+that launches that desktop.
 
 * Set Up Your Shell Profile
 
-Finally, in order to automatically launch an X session upon login, you
-will need to edit the =.bash_profile= (bash) or =.zprofile= (zsh) files
-for your shell:
+Finally, in order to automatically launch an X session upon login, you will need
+to edit the =.bash_profile= (bash) or =.zprofile= (zsh) files for your shell:
 
 #+begin_src sh
 nano ~/.zprofile
 #+end_src
 
-Add the following snippet to the end of the shell profile file. This
-will execute the =startx= command upon login.
+Add the following snippet to the end of the shell profile file. This will
+execute the =startx= command upon login.
 
 #+begin_src sh
 if [ -z "${DISPLAY}" ] && [ "${XDG_VTNR}" -eq 1 ]; then
@@ -72,6 +69,6 @@ if [ -z "${DISPLAY}" ] && [ "${XDG_VTNR}" -eq 1 ]; then
 fi
 #+end_src
 
-Alternatively, you can ignore this step and simply choose to manually
-execute =startx= upon login. This can be useful if you have issues with
-your desktop or like to manually launch different desktops by choice.
+Alternatively, you can ignore this step and simply choose to manually execute
+=startx= upon login. This can be useful if you have issues with your desktop or
+like to manually launch different desktops by choice.