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@@ -5,39 +5,37 @@
 
 * The Dilemma
 
-For years, I have been using desktops and a Raspberry Pi as the backbone
-of my homelab. I have always wanted to move toward a single dedicated
-server that could handle all of my tasks, but was often put off by the
-complexity of the choices (and financial roadblocks at some times).
+For years, I have been using desktops and a Raspberry Pi as the backbone of my
+homelab. I have always wanted to move toward a single dedicated server that
+could handle all of my tasks, but was often put off by the complexity of the
+choices (and financial roadblocks at some times).
 
-However, after purchasing a small server rack this past year, I have
-been researching to see what kind of rack-mounted server I could buy. I
-initially bought a Dell R720XD loaded up with everything I could ever
-want in a server - but I did not care for it. It was far too loud, and
-the age of the CPU/RAM was something I wanted to improve upon.
+However, after purchasing a small server rack this past year, I have been
+researching to see what kind of rack-mounted server I could buy. I initially
+bought a Dell R720XD loaded up with everything I could ever want in a server -
+but I did not care for it. It was far too loud, and the age of the CPU/RAM was
+something I wanted to improve upon.
 
-After returning the R720XD, I decided that I wanted to build my own
-server with modern, consumer-grade PC components. This time, I am very
-happy with the results of my server.
+After returning the R720XD, I decided that I wanted to build my own server with
+modern, consumer-grade PC components. This time, I am very happy with the
+results of my server.
 
 * Components
 
 I'll start by listing all the components I used for this server build:
 
-- *Case*:
-  [[https://www.rosewill.com/rosewill-rsv-r4100u-black/p/9SIA072GJ92825][Rosewill
-  RSV-R4100U 4U Server Chassis Rackmount Case]]
+- *Case*: [[https://www.rosewill.com/rosewill-rsv-r4100u-black/p/9SIA072GJ92825][Rosewill RSV-R4100U 4U Server Chassis Rackmount Case]]
 - *Motherboard*: [[https://nzxt.com/product/n7-b550][NZXT B550]]
 - *CPU*: AMD Ryzen 7 5700G with Radeon Graphics
-- *GPU*: N/A - I specifically chose one of the few AMD CPUs that support
-  onboard graphics.
+- *GPU*: N/A - I specifically chose one of the few AMD CPUs that support onboard
+  graphics.
 - *RAM*: 64GB RAM (2x32GB) /Max of 128GB RAM on this motherboard/
 - *Boot Drive*: Western Digital 500GB M.2 NVME SSD
 - *HDD Bay*:
   - 10TB WD White /(shucked, moved from previous server)/
   - 8TB WD White /(shucked, moved from previous server)/
-  - 2 x 8TB WD Red Plus /(Black Friday lined up perfectly with this
-    build, so I grabbed two of these)/
+  - 2 x 8TB WD Red Plus /(Black Friday lined up perfectly with this build, so I
+    grabbed two of these)/
 - *PSU*: Corsair RM850 PSU
 - *Extras*:
   - Corsair TM3Q Thermal Paste
@@ -47,54 +45,52 @@ I'll start by listing all the components I used for this server build:
 
 * Building the Server
 
-This took quite a while for me to build (in my opinion of time),
-totaling around 3 hours from start to finish. The case has some peculiar
-construction, so you have to completely remove the ODD & HDD cages to
-install the motherboard and other components first.
+This took quite a while for me to build (in my opinion of time), totaling around
+3 hours from start to finish. The case has some peculiar construction, so you
+have to completely remove the ODD & HDD cages to install the motherboard and
+other components first.
 
-Now, I've never built a computer of any kind before, so I was quite
-nervous. Personally, the only challenging part was getting the CPU
-cooler to screw into the motherboard without sliding the thermal paste
-around too much underneath. I'm still not entirely sure if I did a great
-job of it, but nothing's broken yet.
+Now, I've never built a computer of any kind before, so I was quite nervous.
+Personally, the only challenging part was getting the CPU cooler to screw into
+the motherboard without sliding the thermal paste around too much underneath.
+I'm still not entirely sure if I did a great job of it, but nothing's broken
+yet.
 
-The main components were all fine and simple. However, installing the
-hard drives is slightly tedious as I need to power off the server and
-completely unscrew the HDD cage to install or remove any drives.
-Additionally, the drives are screwed directly into the metal cage with
-small screws, which are quite a bit different from the HDD trays I'm
-used to in other machines.
+The main components were all fine and simple. However, installing the hard
+drives is slightly tedious as I need to power off the server and completely
+unscrew the HDD cage to install or remove any drives. Additionally, the drives
+are screwed directly into the metal cage with small screws, which are quite a
+bit different from the HDD trays I'm used to in other machines.
 
-Seeing that the cases with hot-swap bays were 3-4x the price, I'm okay
-dealing with the tedium of removing the cage to install new drives.
+Seeing that the cases with hot-swap bays were 3-4x the price, I'm okay dealing
+with the tedium of removing the cage to install new drives.
 
 * Software
 
-I'm not going to dive into the software as I have done so in other
-recent posts. However, I wanted to note that I am using Alpine Linux on
-this server and hosting most services inside Docker. No virtual machines
-(VMs) and very few bare-metal services.
+I'm not going to dive into the software as I have done so in other recent posts.
+However, I wanted to note that I am using Alpine Linux on this server and
+hosting most services inside Docker. No virtual machines (VMs) and very few
+bare-metal services.
 
 * The Results
 
-How did my build turn out? Well, after migrating my other servers and
-their services over, I found that my server is blazing fast. The
-heaviest of my applications, Plex, is handled with ease. Even 4k
-streaming seems to be effortless.
+How did my build turn out? Well, after migrating my other servers and their
+services over, I found that my server is blazing fast. The heaviest of my
+applications, Plex, is handled with ease. Even 4k streaming seems to be
+effortless.
 
-I am very happy with the results and will likely continue to improve on
-this server as the years go by rather than buying another used server
-online.
+I am very happy with the results and will likely continue to improve on this
+server as the years go by rather than buying another used server online.
 
 ** Mistakes I Made
 
-This post wouldn't be complete unless I wrote about the mistakes I made
-while building. The only real mistake I made beyond a "whoops I dropped
-a screw" related to airflow and fan direction.
+This post wouldn't be complete unless I wrote about the mistakes I made while
+building. The only real mistake I made beyond a "whoops I dropped a screw"
+related to airflow and fan direction.
 
-While installing the two new hard drives that showed up on 2022-11-30
-and getting ready to install the case in my rack, I noticed that the
-hard drive temperatures were quite high.
+While installing the two new hard drives that showed up on 2022-11-30 and
+getting ready to install the case in my rack, I noticed that the hard drive
+temperatures were quite high.
 
 I used the =smartctl= command for each of my drives (=/dev/sda= through
 =/dev/sdd=):
@@ -104,9 +100,8 @@ doas smartctl -a /dev/sda | grep Temperature_Celsius
 #+end_src
 
 The results were unusual - all four drives were idling at ~44-46 degrees
-Celsius. The only drive that was cooler was my 10TB drive, which was at
-38 degrees Celsius. I noted that this 10TB drive was also closest to the
-case fan.
+Celsius. The only drive that was cooler was my 10TB drive, which was at 38
+degrees Celsius. I noted that this 10TB drive was also closest to the case fan.
 
 #+begin_src sh
 ID# ATTRIBUTE_NAME          FLAG     VALUE WORST THRESH TYPE      UPDATED  WHEN_FAILED RAW_VALUE
@@ -120,15 +115,14 @@ ID# ATTRIBUTE_NAME          FLAG     VALUE WORST THRESH TYPE      UPDATED  WHEN_
 194 Temperature_Celsius     0x0002   171   171   000    Old_age   Always       -     38 (Min/Max 14/56)
 #+end_src
 
-After looking to see if I could fit more fans into the case, I noticed
-that the 120mm fan used for intake from the front of the case was
-actually pushing air out of the case by mistake. This fan sits right in
-front of the hard drive bay.
+After looking to see if I could fit more fans into the case, I noticed that the
+120mm fan used for intake from the front of the case was actually pushing air
+out of the case by mistake. This fan sits right in front of the hard drive bay.
 
-Once I flipped the fan around to act as an intake fan, the temperatures
-dropped immediately! They are now idling at ~31-33 degrees Celsius. A
-single fan spinning the wrong way caused my drives to idle 10-15 degrees
-higher than they should have.
+Once I flipped the fan around to act as an intake fan, the temperatures dropped
+immediately! They are now idling at ~31-33 degrees Celsius. A single fan
+spinning the wrong way caused my drives to idle 10-15 degrees higher than they
+should have.
 
 #+begin_src sh
 ID# ATTRIBUTE_NAME          FLAG     VALUE WORST THRESH TYPE      UPDATED  WHEN_FAILED RAW_VALUE
@@ -142,6 +136,5 @@ ID# ATTRIBUTE_NAME          FLAG     VALUE WORST THRESH TYPE      UPDATED  WHEN_
 194 Temperature_Celsius     0x0002   196   196   000    Old_age   Always       -     33 (Min/Max 22/46)
 #+end_src
 
-This was a silly error to make, but I'm glad I found it today before I
-screwed the case into the rack and made things a lot more tedious to
-fix.
+This was a silly error to make, but I'm glad I found it today before I screwed
+the case into the rack and made things a lot more tedious to fix.